從2015英語一真題談考研大作文的基本套路

　　亞里士多德在《詩論》中曾經(jīng)寫過這么一段話：There are, of course, five grounds on which a passage can be censured: it is impossible; it is irrational; it is immoral; it is inconsistentand it is technically at fault. 簡(jiǎn)而言之，其實(shí)就是老師認(rèn)為作文是否低劣，給出了五大評(píng)判標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：不可能、不合理、不道德、前后矛盾、技術(shù)有缺陷。
　　反映在考研作文的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)上，這五個(gè)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)同樣適用。不少考生背的范文不少，但是得分不高，其中原因主要包括以下幾點(diǎn)：1）走題、2）內(nèi)容空洞、3）邏輯混亂、4. 搭配語法錯(cuò)誤多。
　　要想搞定考研英語寫作，說白了就是要解決這四大問題，在這里就結(jié)合2015年最新的大作文真題，給各位2016的考研小貓們支支招。
　　在哥看來，這考研英語的作文，有點(diǎn)像古代的那種八股文，每一段寫的東西都很模式化的，都很固定的，縱觀這十好幾年的真題，本質(zhì)上其實(shí)就分為三種：
　　a）積極類，比如你我一起走南闖北，半瓶水等。
　　b）消極類的，比如旅行之余，溫室花朵，養(yǎng)老足球賽。
　　c）中性類，文化火鍋，網(wǎng)絡(luò)的近與遠(yuǎn)等。
　　但是這三種模板的三段謀篇布局是一樣一樣的。描述圖片+解釋圖片+我們?cè)撛趺崔k。有時(shí)候他會(huì)讓你舉一個(gè)人物的例子，這就更簡(jiǎn)單了，都是提前準(zhǔn)備好的。別著急，后面都會(huì)說到，先說說這第一段。
　　第一段的話，80%的作文書，第一句準(zhǔn)是as vividly+你看到圖中的東西，都用爛了的！喵哥不用，喵哥的弟子就是與眾不同。第一句怎么寫，按下不表，哥先說第二句。這句一般大家會(huì)寫，中文的意思是：這個(gè)東西對(duì)我們的生活產(chǎn)生深遠(yuǎn)的影響。
　　示例：
　　Nowadays, with the increasing popularity of smart phones, it is not unusual to find a group of people sitting around the table, each playing with their smart phones separately instead of talking with each other face to face. As is vividly shown in the picture, the old lady is serving the table disappointedly, with all the other family members absorbed in their electronic products.（64 words）
　　第二段一般是要介紹這個(gè)PP的深遠(yuǎn)意義或者產(chǎn)生的原因，寫三條。第二段一共五句話，第一句說這個(gè)主題意義，2~4句闡述意義或者解釋原因，第五句一個(gè)總結(jié)搞定。
　　參考示例：
　　The symbolic meaning of the photo is the effect of the mobile phone on people's way of life. Undoubtedly, the phone provides us with considerable convenience, making many things possible which are beyond our dreams. As a communication tool, the phone makes us closer than ever before by providing immediate communication. What's more, according to a recent statistic conducted by CASS, the past decade has witnessed a sharp increase in the percentage of people who supports the idea that mobile phone does exert such a profound effect on our life from 21% to 78%. （96words）
　　最后這個(gè)例子肯定是杜撰的，但是可以放心用，不僅所有話題均適用，畢竟只要有觀點(diǎn)，就會(huì)有態(tài)度！第三段很簡(jiǎn)單了，基本上全是模板上去就行了，但是要華麗麗的模板，拒絕千篇一律的垃圾模板。對(duì)于積極類的，我們要怎么讓他做得更好；消極類的，我們?cè)趺锤淖冞@一現(xiàn)狀。
　　總結(jié)起來！
　　全文如下：
　　Nowadays, with the increasing popularity of smart phones, it is not unusual to find a group of people sitting around the table, each playing with their smart phones separately instead of talking with each other face to face. As is vividly shown in the picture, the old lady is serving the table disappointedly, with all the other family members absorbed in their electronic products.
　　The symbolic meaning of the photo is the effect of the mobile phone on people's way of life. Undoubtedly, the phone provides us with considerable convenience, making many things possible which are beyond our dreams. As a communication tool, the phone makes us closer than ever before by providing immediate communication. What's more, according to a recent statistic conducted by CASS, the past decade has witnessed a sharp increase in the percentage of people who supports the idea that mobile phone does exert such a profound effect on our life from 21% to 78%.
　　Joint efforts are needed to ensure people to have face-to-face communication! I believe a harmonious relationship between friends is awaiting us if we set aside our mobile phones and enjoy the untouched meal!（193 words）
　　完畢！
　　這就是我對(duì)今年的考研作文進(jìn)行的一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單分析，歡迎各位來我的班級(jí)進(jìn)行更加深入的學(xué)習(xí)。最后，往者不可諫，來者猶可追！囑托15的考研黨們一定要堅(jiān)持戰(zhàn)斗到底，祝愿2016的考研黨來年好運(yùn)！