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作文是各類(lèi)英語(yǔ)考試中得分較低的一種題型,究其原因,除了平時(shí)缺少練習(xí)之外,同學(xué)們還缺乏寫(xiě)作技巧。同學(xué)們需要掌握一定的作文模板和熟悉大量的話題作文,純模板會(huì)很僵化缺乏彈性。
考研英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作的提高需要大量細(xì)節(jié)的分析和磨練,其中一個(gè)重要的主題是關(guān)于英語(yǔ)創(chuàng)作的重要規(guī)律--seeking variety (追求語(yǔ)言豐富多變)。如何追求變化?
一、注意段首句式的變化
圖畫(huà)作文的段首句往往是"如圖所示"或"從圖畫(huà)中可以看出"之類(lèi),下面為經(jīng)常采用的一些句型:
As is shown in the picture, 和As can be seen from the picture,是經(jīng)常能看到的首句話,但是模板跡象過(guò)于明顯,所以應(yīng)該稍加升級(jí),比如添加一些結(jié)構(gòu)和修飾語(yǔ):
It is of considerable interest to see in the bizarre picture that…
當(dāng)然還可以添加一些引出話題的句子:
No one can skip the issue of…(圖畫(huà)表現(xiàn)出來(lái)的意圖)。Just as what is illustrated in the above drawing,…
二、適當(dāng)用被動(dòng)替換主動(dòng)
這樣能更客觀地反映事實(shí)。
句子開(kāi)頭不要總是用we / I (比如寫(xiě)結(jié)尾時(shí)不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 舉個(gè)經(jīng)典結(jié)尾的例子:It is, therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so,its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively。
三、一句話用不同的句式來(lái)表達(dá)
為了加強(qiáng)同學(xué)們對(duì)語(yǔ)法知識(shí)在寫(xiě)作中的靈活應(yīng)用,下面給出一句話的14種句式及語(yǔ)言調(diào)整的效果,內(nèi)容上沒(méi)有太大差異,但是請(qǐng)同學(xué)們仔細(xì)辨別每句話所側(cè)重的句式:
1.使用表語(yǔ)從句
The picture shows two people reading the announcement on a billboard, and being shocked at the message. The reason is that the billboard is advertising a "sale of the dead bodies"。
2.使用介詞短語(yǔ)
In the picture, two people are reading the announcement and they are being shocked at the message of "a sale of dead bodies" on a billboard。
3.使用疑問(wèn)句
The picture shows two people reading the announcement on a billboard. Why are they so shocked? The reason is that the billboard is advertising a "sale of the dead bodies"。
4.使用原因狀語(yǔ)從句
The picture shows two people reading the announcement on a billboard. As the billboard is advertising a "sale of the dead bodies", they are shocked at the message。
5.使用結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句
The picture shows two people reading the announcement on a billboard. The billboard is advertising a "sale of the dead bodies" so that they are shocked at the message。
6.使用時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句
In the picture, while the two people are reading the announcement on the billboard about "a sale of the dead bodies", they are being deeply shocked。
7.使用分詞短語(yǔ)
In the picture, reading the message of a ‘sale of the dead bodies" advertised on the billboard, the two people are deeply shocked。
8.使用主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)
In the picture, the announcement on a billboard advertising a "sale of the dead bodies" shocks the two people reading it。
9.使用There be 結(jié)構(gòu)
In the picture, there is an announcement on a billboard advertising a "sale of the dead bodies" and shocking the two people reading it。
10.使用倒裝句
On a billboard is an announcement advertising a "sale of the dead bodies". The two people reading it are being shocked。
11.使用定語(yǔ)從句
In the picture, the announcement on a billboard which advertises a "sale of the dead bodies" shocks the two people reading it。
12.強(qiáng)調(diào)句
In the picture, it is the announcement on a billboard advertising a "sale of the dead bodies" that shocks the two people reading it。
13.虛擬語(yǔ)氣
In the picture, were it not for the announcement on the billboard advertising a "sale of the dead bodies", the two people would not be so shocked。
14. 盡量復(fù)雜作文中的句式
It is of considerable interest to observe in this bizarre caricature that a couple of citizens, reading an announcement issued on the billboard, are taken aback as a result of the astounding message which informs people of a "sale of dead bodies"。
句中使用的詞組包括:be of considerable interest, a couple of, taken aback, as a result of, inform sb. of
長(zhǎng)句采用的特殊語(yǔ)法包括:賓語(yǔ)從句+分詞結(jié)構(gòu)做插入語(yǔ)+分詞作后置定語(yǔ)(issued)+被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)+原因短語(yǔ)+定語(yǔ)從句。
以上這些句式的七十二般變化有沒(méi)有讓大家眼花繚亂???學(xué)會(huì)這些再也不用怕和別人“撞文”。拒絕模板,學(xué)會(huì)句式的變化,你就是英語(yǔ)作文寫(xiě)作中那個(gè)最高分的仔!
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